Saturday, September 27, 2014

For Sale: Baby Shoes, Never Worn

Engulfed by the Earth, untouched. Dead.

Amongst the fog; the summit glows.

Claustrophobic, sealed away. Forgotten by all.

Waiting for something. Waiting, for Superman.

Orange glowing in the night; Campfire.

White coating all. Waiting for summer.

2 comments:

  1. My favorite "story" of yours was "Claustrophobic, sealed away. Forgotten by all." because it's descriptive in a sense where it provides enough detail to cause me to be curious about the rest of the story. I think it provides a good example of showing only the "tip of the iceberg" because you can sense that there's a whole another side to the story.

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    1. Thanks Ellaina, my goal with this story was to give an innuendo at someone in a casket however it can be seen in many ways. Thanks again for your comment.

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